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About Me Premium Member Pencil Artist GrevynSeyer22/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 3 Years
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Odenel's Living Chair

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Perfect makeup, hiding the bruises still hoping nobody will see.   
Perfect mouth, gritting teeth wanting to scream.   
Perfect arms, tearing as the razor blade runs across your wrists.   
Perfect eyes, crying while you watch the crimson pour.  
 
Perfect thoughts, dying there on the bathroom floor.   
Nobody will see until your show is finally over.
My Perfect Suicide?
by *whateverjulie

Saddness NOT cool. Come on. *unamused* Anyways... Some of the lines are pretty good actually. It is a good poem. I would reword the ...

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we can never go home...
by *whateverjulie

I can't say much for the poem; it is good but not the feel that caught my attention to the picture. This is a beautiful picture, ...

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my emo face...
by *whateverjulie

The eyes are beautiful, the whole of it, the eyebrows and eyelashes. It is very catching. I like the hair's texture, all the str...

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Devious Info

  • Current Residence: OtherWorld
  • Interests: Video Games, drawings of course, clay sometimes, CoV, horror, animals
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock and Metal
  • Favourite poet or writer: Aeryk Gunn
  • Favourite photographer: paramorefan1827
  • Favourite style of art: Horror and Fantasy
  • Operating System: XP Media Edition
  • MP3 player of choice: PSP
  • Skin of choice: Preferably my own
  • Favourite game: RE Dead Aim
  • Favourite gaming platform: PS2
  • Favourite cartoon character: Joker
  • Personal Quote: Insanity is bliss
  • Tools of the Trade: Pencil and a touch of insanity

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:iconzekkoiyu:
~Zekkoiyu Aug 10, 2009, 6:51:22 AM
Thanks for the fav ^^
:iconparamorefan1827:
*paramorefan1827 Jun 30, 2009, 2:23:19 PM
thanks for the fav and all of the comments/critiques:)

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“Oh, very good,” interrupted Snape, his lip curling. “Yes, it in easy to see that nearly six years of magical education have not been wasted on you, Potter. ‘Ghosts are transparent.’”
-Severus Snape
:iconparamorefan1827:
*paramorefan1827 Jun 30, 2009, 2:23:16 PM
thanks for the fav and all of the comments/critiques:)

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“Oh, very good,” interrupted Snape, his lip curling. “Yes, it in easy to see that nearly six years of magical education have not been wasted on you, Potter. ‘Ghosts are transparent.’”
-Severus Snape
:iconwhateverjulie:
*whateverjulie May 23, 2009, 2:55:52 PM
Thankies for all the adds and the watch! =D

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Jesus Christ is my savior. :)
:iconparamorefan1827:
*paramorefan1827 May 22, 2009, 12:14:31 PM
thanks for the favs and all of the comments on my pictures:)

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“Oh, very good,” interrupted Snape, his lip curling. “Yes, it in easy to see that nearly six years of magical education have not been wasted on you, Potter. ‘Ghosts are transparent.’”
-Severus Snape
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